The feedback I received on my last pitch was very helpful. I was told to sway less and use more effective hand gestures. By taking this advice into account, I think I look more professional in my second elevator pitch. I was also advised to explain my product in fewer sentences. This advice might be good, but I didn’t find it necessary in my case. I think it is important to completely explain the product, and it should be explained fully no matter how many sentences are used. That being said, I did try to be more concise in this pitch.
Hi Molly,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job in incorporating the feedback you were previously given. I understood and followed your pitch. Your idea was clearly explained. I would like to add that wearing more business casual clothes, instead of the furry jacket, would make you appear more professional. I noticed that you kept glancing and staring to your right. This gave the appearance of reading your pitch. I would also like to add that the hook for your pitch is exactly what Professor Chris said not to do. A better hook would be to ask if your audience has experienced the problem you are solving.
Hi! I think you did a good job incorporating your feedback from the first one. Your hook for the pitch was great and you seemed to be talking clear and kept my attention. Overall great job.
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